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Kevin David Kridner's avatar

This poem feels most alive to me before it explains itself. The images wake something without asking me to do anything about it. I noticed I wanted to linger there, in the cold floor and the breath and the quiet invitation, rather than move too quickly into reflection. Sometimes awakening happens before I know what to call it.

Steven Andrus's avatar

Thank you for your thoughts,Kevin.